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Vampire Story Ch.1 by ~Bleedingwounds:iconBleedingwounds:



Intro

My name....my name is sunny...to my friends i am known as Boo. I....am a monster so to speak, a demon, a being cursed to hell. You see....I am a vampire. How did this come to happen? Well you see about a year ago...
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It was a nice day out....at first, I was hanging with my friend at the park, we were just hanging out, listning to music and skateboarding. Something didnt feel right that day.Strange. My friend seemed to be acting differently that day too it was like his mind was in anougher world but i pretended not to notice, I was too busy listning to my music. When i listen to my music, I dont like to be bothered because when im in too a song i like to listen to the lyrics and feel like im part of the song so ill space out alot when i have my ipod on. But.....that day....my friend and I were sitting down on the swings rocking back and forth slowly looking out at the distance, suddenly my friend stood up and stared into my face. I will never forget that look...his face was full of fear, misery, a longing for something. I must have looked shocked because he quickly looked away and whispered faintly that he dosent have much time.

"What are you talking about kyle? Whats wrong??"

"Look boo...someone is coming after meh....I dont have much time to explain."

I looked at him like he was crazy. He asked me if I would do anything for him and of course i replied yes. Suddenly he sprinted at meh and dug his teeth into my neck, I could feel his fangs sink deeper into me. I gasped and tried to push him off as i felt him slowly sucking my blood. After what seemed to be an enternity he pulled his fangs out of my flesh and stepped back licking his lips. I brushed my hand against my neck and felt the blood dripping down my skin, I looked back at him...suddenly I started to feel dizzy. The last thing I remeber is falling backwards off the swing and seeing nothing but darkness. I passed out.
~~Ch. 1~~~~~~~


                I awoke in my bed, confoozed I looked over my shoulder into my mirror. Their were two teeth marks upon my neck and my skin seemed more pale then usual. " Whoa...it wasent a dream...but why would kyle bite me....and what was up with those fangs?"
Sunny sighed and started getting ready, he took a shower and did his hair with his hairspray while putting on some of his make up (also trying to cover up the wounds on his neck). He was a skinny 16 year old boy, he had hair as dark as the night (blue-black) and he had glowing green eyes, average size not too small not too tall. Today he put on a white t-shirt his best friend Kyle made him, it had a picture of two cute looking boys on the front of it saying best friends forever!! Chose his black tight skinny jeans and took off torwards the park. Sunny had a feeling that kyle would be waiting for him their. As sunny came closer to the park he spotted his best friend waiting for him on one of the parks benches...he was wearing the same shirt as sunny.
"Why hello boo!" Kyle said as he smirked and jumped off the table, he walked over to sunny and hugged him. Sunny tugged away and looked at kyle with a serious face throwing his hands into his pockets.

"Ok kyle....Explain what the fuck is going on!! What the hell was that about yesterday!?"

Kyle sighed "Well you see sunny (he only uses my real name when he's serious) their are people hunting me....I...me...I am a vampire."
He explained to me the whole story, how it happned to him...his voice was shakey and he was sweating even though the weather outside was cool. I didnt believe any of it, I started to laugh nervously, asking him to please stop joking around with me. He ran over to me and threw his arms around me, he was crying and softly begging in my ear to believe him. All I could do was slowly nod my head in agreement and try to calm him down. A few mins passed by...we started to take a walk...not towards any specific direction really but just trying to do anything then stand their in that uncomfortable silence. We passed by a house with a beautiful garden, I glanced over at kyle and could see that his eyes were fixed upon a rose in the garden.

"So....what your saying is that your a vampire and now youve made me into one?"

"Yup, pretty much"

"But....why? Why would you make me into one?"

"Well becuase you said you would do anything for meh and I want to be with you forever, I knew you would be the one even after the first day i met you." I started to blush intensly.

"But kyle....why did you say you didnt have much time, what were you talking about?"

He looked into my eyes and for the second time I could see all the fear,sorrow,and misery in them. We stoped at a corner and he took my hand, running he led me into a alley. I took a few seconds to catch my breath, he didnt seem to be tired at all...now that I look at him more closely, he's in great shape....err well maybe that was because of the vampire disease effects. Increasing his physical strenth and stamnia although he looked more pale then usual. He spoke to me in a whisper and said "Their is a.....meeting or a gathering if thats what you would call it, I will be gone for months i'm afraid, you see the people hunting meh have found out who I am and where I live so I will have to leave imediatly."
I leaned against a wall looking down at my slip on's I whispered

" You have to leave already? But I have so many unanswered questions I mean...What am I going to do without you?"

He smiled softly and hugged me, then started to walk away looking back for a breif second seeing the look on my face, he sunk his head down and stared at the ground he whispered that he was sorry and that he would explain everything when he gets back. I saw a tear fall onto the ground as he rushed away, I just stood their, feeling dazed, I decided I needed music badly. I started sprinting torwards my house when all of a sudden I see this girl walking down the sidewalk across the street. I stared at her with my eye's wide open and my jaw dropping, wondering if what I was seeing was an angel disguised as a human being. Pinching my arm I snapped out of it and decided this was no time to be thinking about girls. My head started to fill with thoughts of kyle and all that happned so I raced torwards my house again. As i got to my house I ran into my room and locked the door, I didnt want to see or deal with anyone or anything, I found my ipod and sat in the corner of my closet. I put the volume as high as it could reach and cried to myself. This was all so overwhelming. I felt sick and disgusted, I thought about running away but I knew he would find me no matter where I go. Fell asleep crying, awoke the next morning to find a note on my mirror from kyle:
Hey Boo,
Sorry for all this, I really wish I could explain more
-Kyle P.S. Smooth move sleeping in the closet silly.

Kyle....who is he really? I shook the thought away, only one thing was on my mind right now....school.ugh. Yah i'm a sophmore in highschool, It's the worst school you could possibly enroll in really, if your not popular then your a nobody. All the teachers care about is the football team so they never pay attention when someone is getting beat up by a football player or if a football player does something bad, the teacher will act as if nothing happned. Most of us "nobodys" try to stay out of their way simple because we dont want to deal with it. But it seems I cant ignore them even if i try because of one boy. Derek. When i was younger in 7th grade derek and i used to make fun of eachother alot but I never thought it would get so bad. I use to be merely for fun, but now as we got older he got onto the football team as captain (of course) and im...well im a nobody. Now everyday I have to endure something from him, but Kyle used to help me and protect me against him....now that kyles gone ill have to deal with him myself. Startled as I glanced at my clock "Oh shit!I have to get ready!" Sunny got dressed and did everything quickly, rushing out the door he stumbled down the steps and fell on his face. Sunny moaned and slowly picked himself up, he sprinted torwards school, he was running faster then he have ever before. Is this the effects of the vampire disease? Sunny made it to school 5 mins before the bell was going to ring. He sighed and panted "Phew I made it!"
A couple of popular kids were laughing in the distance, I glared at them and started walking to my classroom mumbling to myself. In school i'll walk with my head down all the time, I guess i'm a little self concious but really I just dont want to see what everyone say's when i walk down the halls. In short school made me miserable and I dont know why I still bother to go. Too keep me busy during the day? Too not get get in trouble with the cops? Mmm oh well.
Two gangster kids were talking untill one saw me, he started to laugh and told the other gangster that he should do his hair like mine. The bitch said "HELL NO! why would I want to look like a fucking cunt!" I hung my head down lower and walked past them, depression was setting in on me till the bell finnally rang. Taking my time to get to the classroom I took a seat at the front desk. The teacher came into the room and made his way to the front, putting down his bag and coat he looked at me with disgust. I grinned. Mr. Krieg only hates me because I made a fool out of him one day.

"Good morning Mr. Krieg!"

he mumbled back "mmm yes"

The only class I like in this school and the teacher hates me. Great. By the middle of the day my body was in extreme pain, I went to the nurse but she said that I was fine, its just that im growing...I stopped growing in 8th grade, this had to be the effects of the vampire disease. My mucles hurt the worst, I would start limping in the halls and doubling over on my stomach for rests. I didnt know how much more I could take of this, but luckily the pain finnally ended torwards the end of school. I was in relief, it wasent such a bad day today, I didnt even see Derek today! ^_^

"So I heard your boyfriend is out of town."

I froze up and slowly turned around, Derek was smirking and a couple of his idiot football friends were standing behind him.
"Aww look guys he's shivering he must be really excited to see me." the football players started to snicker (as if that was funny) I was shaking and I turned around to walk away but derek jumped in fron of me. My voice started to quiver and i said, "Derek im not in the mood for this so just LEAVE ME ALONE!"
As my shout traveled through the hall I saw Mr. Krieg poke his head out of his door and smile when he saw that derek was in front of me with his football friends around me, then he pulled his head back into the class as if nothing was happening. My heart started to beat faster and my head was being consumed by anger, I was shaking violently but all derek and his buddy's did was laugh.

"Whoa watch out guys, he's getting mad! Dont push him too far he might get a razorblade and cut his wrists on us."

"Stupid emo fag!"

"Stop wearing your sisters make up and jeans!"

They started to shove me around in a circle, my mind went blank. I couldent feel, hear, or see anything anymore. It was all such a blur...as if something took over my body, I jumped ontop of derek sending us both to the ground. I dug my nails into his skin and tore out some of his flesh. He screamed in agony and punched me on the side of my head, as i fell to the side i ripped out a chunk of his hair, then i quickly got up. Watching the other football players sprint torwards me I jumped back and delivered a punch into the closets one's stomach. It actually knocked the wind out of him and he fell to the ground. 2 down 2 too go. The last two tackled me to the floor and punched crazily at my head. I could feel them punching me as if too kill me but the pain was numb, my hatred for them was stronger. This last part is sort of a blur but i grabbed them both by their necks and launched them into a wall. The next thing i know i'm running away from the school alley's and when i got far enough I fell to the floor. My face was throbbing, I brushed my hand against my head and saw the blood all over my fingers....I felt lightheaded and closed my eyes......I passed out.
©2008-2009 ~Bleedingwounds
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well...i made this in 2 days heh heh
Just a vampire story i wanted to do.
Byyy:meh? xD
I really dont know if I should continue this though O.o


dedicated to:iconxinternalbleedingx: for making meh write eet ^^
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awsomeness I loves it :highfive: good job

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Come to the darkside we have cookies if u refuse we shall eat your soul with rusty sporks.Must destroy all humans. Must obey master.
OMG AWESOMEST

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i loved you, i hate you, you hurt me, i love you, i loved you, you hurt me bad ♥
awesome story, cool idea. write another chapter!!!!!
*applauds*
me likey.
a LOT.
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do you dance in slow motion too?
cool! ^^

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You can sit beside me when the world comes down, if it doesn't matter
then just turn around.
We don't need our bags and we can just leave town.
You can sit beside me when the world comes down.
-"Mona Lisa" by the All-American Rejects
I can't finish it. I'm laughing too hard. XD

YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT ME OR MY RACE!
RAWR!!!!!

Stupid werewolf... >.> lol.

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All is fair in love and war... and frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn.
yikes...you can really write....nice one

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Red Is The Rose On Your Coffin Door
Despite the need to bop you on the head with a spell check button, and the knowledge that the vampire thing is becoming way over done...
I like it. It is a lot better than most of the things I write.
I would read more if you wrote it :)
I might even be a fan. That is, if you do decide to continue it.

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-Hide behind your half smile-
-But the truth is so undeniable-
-Sh sh shouldn't need anyone-
-Shouldn't need anyone-
-Just scared of being alone-
-But by the time you figure this out-
-And I'm already gone-

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