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Darling Dear, Where is the medic
The red water is all over
Darling Dear, Where are the anstetics
I feel I may be sober

Darling Dear, Where are you going?
Does my presense disgust you?
Darling Dear, The tears are flowing
I promise I shall never leave you

Darling Dear, The medic never arrived
This place is empty and lonely
Darling Dear, Our love had never died
:iconbleedingwounds:

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its supid...

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:iconemilymelted:
its not stupid...

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So a day when you've lost yourself completely
Could be a night when your life ends
Such a heart that will lead you to deceiving
All the pain held in your
Hands are shaking cold
Your hands are mine to hold
:iconfallonbird:
No it's not stupid. It's sweet, but tragic. I really like it =)
:iconxpullingxthextrigger:
have some self-confidence dear, it's not stupid. it's short and sweet and tragic and yeah, I rather like it.

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TOO MANY ARROWS!!!!
:iconblackened-sun:
...OMG i totally learned what poems like this are called today in language arts... right after the teacher cursed cause she couldn't find a handout on Shakespear... iamic? what every i like it simple and repetative but gets an emotion across... which is good in poetry
:iconbleedingwounds:
heh yeah im not too good at self confidence

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fuck
:iconjacylansanglane:
Darling Dear, you are stupid for thinking it was stupid...but don't worry...I still love you and your big retarded brain. (:

[but really it's quite good. I'm proud of you ^^]


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All is fair in love and war... and frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn.

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